Friday, August 21, 2009
Jacket
Ben Wolf was just an ordinary teenager worried about girls, sports, and their life after high school. He was looking for an auspicious year ahead of him- before he received the news. Ben was a laid back guy before this turning point came along. He then turned into a chicanery person just to hide the news. Ben was not a churlish person, and he even had a bellicose attitude towards making the best of the situation.
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I think bellicose and chicanery are misused. Check their parts of speech.
ReplyDeleteWhere's the picture?
Otherwise, good job.